As LIFE GOES ON n shaping up nicely, everything seems,
As things keep moving n changing, merrily life leads,
Suddenly altogether something disgusting, my heart sees,
And in this despair, no ray of happiness from anywhere peeps....
Cannot this all evil ever finish, my heart feels,
Could not it be a misunderstanding, as my mind deals,
The answer comes out to be no and I fall back leaps,
The self den realises dat, life is full of sorrows as it proceeds....
Deepened in deepest depths, my heart drowns deep,
Everyone around makes me sad, and happy moments sieze,
The world is bad and no feelings, here any one keeps,
Come down Praharsh (life says), loneliness is ur only frnd apart 4m dreams...
And in this loneliness, my heart altogether sinks,
The sentiments hurt and feelings fall into the deeps,
Happiness rips apart, and sadness inside creeps.....
Shedding out lotsa tears, MY HEART WEEPS....
Oozing out lotsa blood, MY HEART BLEEDS.......
MY HEART WEEPS....MY HEART BLEEDS....
LIFE GOES ON, but still at times in loneliness, MY HEART WEEPS...
Shedding out tears, MY HEART WEEPS....
Oozing out blood, MY HEART BLEEDS.....
MY HEART WEEPS......!!!
MY HEART BLEEDS.....!!!
17 comments:
very sweet poem written straight from heart for someone( n i know ....that someone has recoganised it).
par itna senti nai hone ka ,love is a long game its not jus a question of few days........
dont let ur heart b sad , jus b happy n cool as u r always....
abey propose kar chuke ho ka?
this one is good...
liked it...
again wish u better luck and maturity...
On Shubhangi :
array dear...ye love tak kahan pahunch gaye..?? waise this comment is a very sweet one from u... :)
On Vakrachakshu :
My Pleasure sir to have dis 4m u...
let not YOUR heart weep to d xtent dat SOMEBODY else's bleeds....
On Kishu :
itna chahne waala koi hai nahi is duniya mein mera Mam...dun worry... ;)... hota to ye poem likhne ki naubat nahi aati...anoder perfect use of words...ap seriously likhna shuru kar do... :)
i don 9 y u feel ki itna chahne wala koi hai hi nahi apka..zara nazar ghumaiye KASH apko dikh jaye..kabhi koi inspiration mile to jarur likhungi...
On Kishu :
ha ha....getting naughty Mam !!
Prob ye hai na ki jinhe hum chahte hein wo hume nahi chahte aur jinhe hum nahi chahte wo hume chahne lagte hain... ;)...
d best of ur compositions........
a touching piece......
a really good poet in making ......i should say......
Thanxx deary for these encouraging n sweet words 4m u .... :) :)
this wat a face of life.....truely touchin....n close 2 d life of every person....
yet other poems include other colors of life....
keep writing....
:)
On Pratha :
Such sweet words from u after tons of request encouraged dis guy n made him feel dat d compositions really do make sense...Thanxx... :) :)
ye kya bakwaas likha hai......[:P]
On Akshay :
I pray life does not give you the experiences to appreciate these thoughts and sides of life. But I am sure your life will.. :)
achhi poem hai
par itna senti hona achha nhi hai
mana dil se likha hai par kuch happy happy bhi likho
okki :)
On Jayantika :
Thanks dear...Arrey happy honge tab na kuch happy likhenge... Ab zindagi ne hamari dictionary me khushi daali hi nahi to kya karein.. ;) ;) ;)
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