Can there ever be that Perfect Gal ?
Whom I cd say, she shd be my best pal...
Who is ulti talented n multi blessed...
Who is much confident n yet so modest...
When she talks, people ought to listen...
And to her advice, u got to cling...
Who is competent to fail the rest n...
Who is intelligent to judge the best...
When she sings, those melodies sooth...
The heart gets pleased and feelings boost...
When her lips caress ma song, it gets immortal...
When she smiles,u cant resist asking 4 a laughter...
Whom the world cd say, she is beauty personified...
For whom anything of theirs, d guys cd sacrifice...
Just one sight and no one wd lyk to get apart...
Looks dont matter much, she shd b pure at heart...
Yes there she is, I know this Perfect Gal,
And I am sure she should be ma best pal...
But can there ever be that Perfect Gal??
For whom, I could be her best pal...
Can there ever be that perfect Gal??
For whom, I could be her best pal...
Can there ever be that Perfect Gal??
Can there ever be ??
24 comments:
D poems ver gud n seemed 2 ve evoloved strt frm ur heart....but frankly...d wrd "perfect" went bove my head....let me tell u sth. mothin's n noone's perfect in dis world......its gud 2 be sensitive, cute,helpin n carin n no probs in gettin emotional bout anyone but jus keep dis in ur mind dat u rnt made fun of.....vaise d poems ver quite sweet n decent....:)
hi dear...
its amazng yaar.m not xpctin this 4rm a tronix man..frankly spkng it cms very close to my heart too but i do feel dat it's very near to ideal one.ne ws it's a gr8 atmt 2 xprs ur emotions.i wish 4 da day wn dat perfect choose of urs will meet u...
truely speakin tht i don't know praharsh personally bt he explains himself thr his wonderful art. its really very nice n i'm sure he learned such a beautiful talent frm our very respected n dear principal sir, rite praharsh??
keep this spirit of urs always up....
On Stuti :
Thanx for such an analytic comment...Wd surely take care of what u said.... :)
On Siddharth :
I hope she meets me soon... ;)
waise IT me likhne waalon me tronix waale hi hain mostly...some links on d blog r examples..Thanx for dis sweet one sir..
On Priyanka :
Nothing from our Principal dear.. ;)
Its coz of someone else...n e wayzz dis was a cute one 4m u... :)
as far s i 9.. u r fortunate enuf to drive ur luck d way u want..so put in efforts..u'll surely be d "PERFECT PAL"...of d "BEST GAL"...
On Kishu :
This sweet one could only b expected frm u sweetheart..So u wish me to b the "PERFECT PAL of the BEST GAL"...I hope too...n e wayz nice imagination...mein to yahin kahoonga ki tum bhi likhna shuru kar do.. :)
Yeah, there's a perfect gal out there. Just keep looking like the rest of us. :)
On the ice man (Maggie) :
Thanxx Maggie...
Alwayz lyk ur stuff..
A lot humorous n a lot sweet.... :)
man...a really gud one...cant blv dat u ve riten diz piece!! Keep it up!! ..
& hey don xpect there's anything like a "perfect" gal or a perfect boy .coz u have 2 accept da different aspects of sb's else personality which u may nt like at all..Yes!! Wat wat one can have is "A Perfect Relationship"!!
Watdyathink ?
On Manvender :
So nice of u dude !! Kaafi tareef ki hai aapne...itnee phodu likhi thee kya?? ;)..U r "Perfect"ly rite dat dere can never be a perfect one... but ma definition of a perfect one is wat d poem says...n there can b such a gal 4 sure...rather I said I know one...n u 2...he he... "A Perfect Relationship" is surely possible n the two experiencing that wd b d luckiest two on dis earth...What say??..n e wayzz thanx 4 dese lovely words 4m u... :) :)
this is fr the perfect gal.... pls find this guy werever u r... pls... otherwise he'll storm us wid d posts like dis one... "wr can i find u my lovvee..." o god if u r listening... grant his wish... he needs it the most...
btw... gud yaar... i never knew u cud write such marvellous stuff... and ya also i never thot u can be romantic... neways... it seems u've proved me wrong... god save the perfect gal... ( fr u buddy...not FROM u...)...
keep writin bro... it'll help many young lovers to find their gals... guys like u keep the world movin...
keep up the gud wrk... ciao..
On Neeraj :
Anoder sweet n analysed one 4m d Soft Toy...
Was dat so teddy?? U thought me to b an unromantic guy !! Better have a word wid dose pretty gals who have had d pleasure 2 enjoy d romantic side of mine !! :) :) But d search is yet on for the Perfect Gal !!! n dun make any typical gibberish guesses on dis one please !!! :) :)
hey the poem is quite gud....but u seem 2 be getting bit desperate in the end with ur "could there be..... "could there be...." hehehe but all in all.....that was 1 gud piece of creation..... but 1 things 4 sure...no1 is perfect.... so u gotta find sum1 who wud be almost equivalent 2 ur imagination of that flawless gal... ;-)keep searching.... u wud find sum1 4 sure.... :-P
On Aaliya :
What did I hear...?? Desperate !!
Ha Ha Ha...Nothing as such...But when nature makes u come across its creations which u heartly admire, ur heart wanna write stuff lyk dis one... Thanxx 4 dese sweet bytes dear !!! :) :)
bahuuuut badhiya............keep it up..........tumhe tumhari kalpanao ki nayika zaroor milegi.....lage raho...........keep trying.
buaji ka aashirvad tumhare saath hai.
On Upasana :
Thanx a lot dear buaji...Humein pata hai ki aap ka aashirwaad to hamesha hi saaath hai...Umeed hai aapkee bahu ko jaldi ghar layenge...Ha Ha Ha.. :) :) :)
do tell ur love thata how much u love her its very important
if she really loves u or deserves u love she will understand u
On Anonymous...
She knows it... :) :) :)
abe tu to chupa rustam nikla yaar.....if its original....then.....only 1 word i can say.........."awesome!!!!!"..........keep it up dude.....ab pata chala ki tum kya karte rehte ho......
On Yogesh :
He he ... abe dude...ye sab to hum class me karte hain...Thanx for such sweet comments of urs... :) :)
This is great info to know.
On Alyson:
Thanks dear but may I know who is this?
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