Thursday, September 27, 2007

WO CHAR DIN !!!



Usee ke saath me bitaye the wo char din,
Usee kee baaton ne sajay the wo char din,
Us ke saath ke siwa, mujhe to aur kuch achha na laga,
Mere saath me lekin , shayad usne ganway the wo chaar din.....

Shehar kee aabad sadkon par, tanha ghoomne ki chahat mein,
Khud se baat karte karte , mehakti hawaon ki rahat mein,
Meine is tarah to na kabhi, guzaarne chahe the wo char din,
Lekin kuch aisee hi umeed thee aane waale char din....

Fir dheere dheere uska saath mila, mere dil ko farmaan mila,
Sadkon par ghanto ghoomne ko matlab aur dil ko aaram mila,
Idhar-udhar uthte-baithte, baatein sunte aur hanste hue katne lage wo char din,
Jeevan ke sabse haseen pal lagne lage, usee ke saath wo char din....

Apnee jagah se kaheen door, us ke saath bitaye bas kuch khoobsurat pal de wo char din,
Us kee baaton ne bahut kuch bataya aur sikhaya , jeevan ke un char din,
Mere saath se lekin, shayad use na kuch acchha laga un chaar din,
Mere saath me isliye, shayad usne ganway the wo char din.....

(isliye kehta hoon...)US KE SAATH MEIN MEINE SAJAY THE WO CHAR DIN, MERE SAATH ME LEKIN SHAYAD USNE GANWAY THE WO CHAR DIN....

(isliye kehtaa hoon...)US KE SAATH MEIN MEINE SAJAY THE WO CHAR DIN, MERE SAATH ME LEKIN SHAYAD USNE GANWAY THE WO CHAR DIN....

13 comments:

vakrachakshu said...

i wish u better luck and maturity baby...[:)]

prachi mittal said...

very nice...........
tumhe dekhte hue to kaphi achchi hai........
bechari ladki tumhe mil gayi to sar peet legi...........ha ha ha

just joking..........nice one

Praharsh Sharma said...

On Prachi :
shayad peet legi...ab ye to wahee bata sakti hai na!!! ... waise ye sachchi kahani hai...

Praharsh Sharma said...

On Vakrachakshu :
aapke level ki maturity to nahi aa sakti na sir... ;)...thanx 4 a sweet one...

Neeraj Soni said...

sachan is rite... everybody wishes fr u man...
btw... the poem is one of its kind... with emotions overflowin frm every word... the ones who went to delhi can understand it better... [;)]...

may u get wat u want boy... thats all i wish... bas 'us' ki bhi yahi ichcha ho to...

Praharsh Sharma said...

On Neeraj :
Thanxx Soni...Damn correct buddy!!
Although emotions overflow frm each of ma poem's words, I dun get one thing..Why does dis amuse u so much?? Upto something untold?? ;)
Jokes apart, dis was anoder one of a cute Soni stuff!! Thanxx dude! :)

Manvender said...

man ...Damn gud work yaar!! If u keeping on going like well kuch dino main aapke shayaari aur poems ki book publish karwa denge hum...
btw waise hume lagta hai aapke woh chaar din bahut suhaane rahe 'unke' saath... kyun ? ..;)

Praharsh Sharma said...

On Manvender :
Oh buddy !!! What did u say??
The booooook??....Oh great!!
n e wayzz I may suggest u a better author for ur publication...Guess !!!....Yep u guessed it right man...;) ;)...ur lil baby... ;) ;)
Hamare din to they hee suhaane lekin unke kaise rahe ?? Apke saaath waalee shaam or aglee subah ko chhod ke to shayad unke boring he they... ;) ;)

Unknown said...

Its really a beautiful poem aur sabse badi baat ye hai ki ise dil se likhi gayi hai...
keep going dear!!
aur fikar not u definately will have even better times in ur life aur tab aisa likhana ki bas us kavita ki har lafz seedhe dil se baatein kare..[:)]

Praharsh Sharma said...

On Anonymous :
Thanxx buddy for dis very very sweet one from u but cant guess what stopped u 4m revealing ur identity...
I will try ki aapke dil se meree poems ke lafz jaldi hi baat karlein taaaki pata chale ki aap kaun hain... :)

Niketa Singh said...

well, to be really critical abt. it- please refrain frm using colloquial words......stick either to urdu/hindi vocabulary...hybrid language is the copyrigt of Shobha de so let its purlieus be restricted to her.....anyways i can feel or may be just claim to feel the emotions pouring out of ur heart onto the paper!!!!!!!!!

Praharsh Sharma said...

Thanks dear for your so nice comments... I liked the critical viewpoint. I think I have already corrected these things in my later ones.. Thanks a lot though ! :)

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